‘The Marlows and the Traitor’, Part Eight

Saturday Night: Foley’s Folly Light

Now we’re back to Peter, in the lighthouse’s lantern room, watching the girls carry out the first phase of their plan. A few days ago he’d been questioning his future at Dartmouth and taking absurd risks to try to prove himself, but now he seems more confident and thoughtful:

“All his life he was going to have to be prepared to make plans which would risk other people’s lives as well as, or even instead of, his own. And the older he got, and the more important, the more it would happen to him. Besides […] it wasn’t as if the alternatives at the moment lay between danger of their own making and eventual safety at Foley’s hands. If they waited, they were almost certain to be killed when the U-boat’s crew got hold of them. And besides–Peter blushed rather, for it sounded pretty pompous as soon as you put it into words–it was probably a thing they ought to do–to do everything they could to prevent that oilskin package falling into enemy hands. And you couldn’t fight the enemy without taking some risks.”

He goes out onto the narrow, wind-shaken walkway to watch Ginty and Nicola almost drown, then once the crisis is over, suddenly remembers his terrible, paralysing fear of heights. He finally manages to crawl inside the lantern room, berating himself all the while (“how jolly silly he must look, crawling painfully along a gallery which Nicola, for instance, would simply have run round”), but then – Foley comes in! Peter shoots out onto the gallery and tip-toes around it, keeping himself on the opposite side of Foley until Foley gives up searching the rocks below and goes back downstairs. Hooray, Peter’s fear of heights has now gone! So that’s one good thing Foley has achieved.

Peter now has a long wait till night falls and the fleet returns, so he passes the time reading the horrifying diary of Fabian de Noyes Foley, the wrecker ancestor – a book which Lewis Foley keeps in the lantern room, although, given how much he worships his ancestor, you’d think he’d store the diary in a more secure place. It’s good to see Peter showing a proper respect for other people’s books, though:

“…that book had made him feel so absolutely furious that if it hadn’t belonged to someone else, he would have dropped it over the rail to be pulped and pounded to pieces by the sea.”

It doesn’t matter if people are traitors – don’t damage their books, especially irreplaceable historical records.

At last, Nicola and Ginty arrive (Nicola is very relieved to see that Foley hadn’t shoved Peter off the top of the lighthouse that morning) and they start sending out their SOS as soon as the fleet appears. But it’s rainy and the fleet is far away and there’s no answering signal. (Typical of those adults.) So poor Peter and Nicola (Ginty is being useless again) keep signalling into the night, knowing it’s hopeless – except all at once, there’s a response! They send their message and are asked to repeat the bit about the U-boat’s arrival time and then they read the signals “message received” and “R”. (Is it Robert? Frankly, he’s the only adult I have any faith in at the moment.)

Meanwhile, Ginty is on the stairs thinking of all the dreadful things that could happen to them – getting shot, having to go in the U-boat, being carted off to Siberia – when she hears Foley running up the steps. She doesn’t even have any weapons, but she resolves to do her best:

“She never doubted he would overwhelm her in the end, whatever she did, but she might have been able to hold him off, just long enough for the others to get the message through.”

Aw, now I like Ginty again! And I like her even more when she throws her paraffin lantern in Foley’s face, causing him to lose his footing and tumble all the way down the stairs. Unfortunately, he’s still alive, just badly injured. Peter gets the package of secrets off him and Nicola locates the key to the transmitting room, although Ginty is busy feeling “more worried than a good counter-spy should over an enemy agent who has been put out of action.” She administers first-aid while Peter retrieves the revolver from the transmitting room and locks it.

Things are looking up! The only problem is, Peter suddenly realises that they don’t know who responded to their signal. What if it was the U-boat? (It’s okay, Peter. I’m sure it was Robert. Well, fairly sure.)

Sunday Morning: Ships in the Bay

Foley regains consciousness and is rather surprised to see Peter is alive. Foley is also not very happy to learn that the children have signalled to the navy, especially when Peter says he’s thrown both the secrets and the downstairs key into the sea. Foley is now doomed, but the children’s fate depends on whether the U-boat or the navy reaches the lighthouse first. And then a fog rolls in. Oh, the suspense…

Now a boat is approaching! But is it friend or foe? Nicola dashes off “with a relishing piratical look” to fetch knives for her and Ginty:

“Ginty stared at the knife in her hand without any relish at all. It was quite plain that whatever sort of fight Peter and Nicola intended to put up against the U-boat crew, Ginty meant to go quietly.”

Poor Ginty. Especially as the boat carries the U-boat crew. Ginty goes inside and puts her hands over her ears because “she simply wasn’t going to see or hear anything until they came to take her.”

But Peter and Nicola are made of sterner stuff. They watch Foley getting berated on the beach for failing to kill the children and losing the secret information – foiled by those pesky kids! – and then Peter loudly defies the enemy leader’s orders for the children to get down on the beach. The enemy leader brandishes a revolver at Nicola and worse, calls Peter a “little boy” who needs to be taught a lesson.

So Peter shoots him dead with Foley’s revolver.

Don’t mess with the Marlows!

Then the fog rolls away, revealing not just the U-boat but three Navy destroyers. Well, it’s about time they showed up. In an immensely exciting scene, the men on the beach, including Foley, try to get back to the U-boat, but the Navy blows up the U-boat and Foley and capture the surviving U-boat crew. But even in the midst of the action, the author makes space for astute observations of characters’ reactions:

“‘Oh, Binks,” [Nicola] said half-sobbing. ‘Why didn’t you stop him? He’ll be killed, I know he will.’
‘He’d rather be,’ said Peter, grabbing her, ‘I should think. Get down, Nick. They’re firing.’
Nicola, however, put her head up. She was still, though she hadn’t the least idea of it, sobbing in a breathless way because Foley was dead, or about to be, but at the same time she was intensely interested in what was going on.”

Eventually the children are taken aboard one of the destroyers to tell their story to Commander Whittier and Nicola is only mildly surprised, at this stage, to find Robert Anquetil on board. Whittier tells them about Lawrie’s accident and Nicola says her father will be furious that Lawrie didn’t have her bus fare and didn’t look before she ran across the road (which is, in fact, what he says when he finds out). Then Whittier says “that sounds like Geoff Marlow.” So Whittier actually knew Commander Marlow personally and still said the Marlow children were expendable! (Heaven knows what he’d have done if it’d been a group of working-class non-navy children – probably used any surviving children as live bait for his next useless spy-catching scheme.)

Whittier also says they’re to forget everything that happened and not to speak about it again, not even amongst themselves. Well, that’s really going to help Ginty’s post-traumatic stress disorder. He also mentions that Johnnie Thorpe “knows more than he should” and that Johnnie’s also been warned to keep silent forever. Then Nicola thinks to ask Whittier who saw their signal and is gruffly told it was Robert:

“But it was quite obvious there was a grandmother and a grandfather of a row on, so she said sturdily: ‘It was jolly lucky he was there. ‘Cos we were signalling when the Fleet passed and they never saw a thing.’”

Then she stares Commander Whittier down until he agrees with her and apologises to Robert. Yay, Nicola! Then she gets to spend the rest of the voyage on the destroyer’s bridge and she doesn’t feel a bit seasick. Really, it’s Nicola who ought to be at Dartmouth.

Also, Whittier asks Peter what he said to the enemy leader, then explains that man was the Nazi equivalent of a Rear-Admiral:

“So just remember, when some haughty sub in your first ship is telling you what a low form of life you are, that you once gave a Rear-Admiral his marching orders.”

And, you know, shot and killed him. But it doesn’t even seem that there’s going to be an inquiry into that. At least Peter is happy that he still has a naval career and that his vertigo is cured.

Finally, the children meet their relieved mother and they go off to see Lawrie in hospital, where Lawrie is being Lawrie:

“Whatever had happened to the others, Lawrie didn’t think it could have been nearly as impressive as what had happened to her. Fractured bones, broken bones, concussion–Lawrie felt they would have to produce something pretty remarkable to compete with that.”

Oh, Lawrie. What a goop.

Final random thoughts:

– What happened to Ida Cross? Did they arrest her? How did a woman like that even get mixed up with Foley? Assuming she wasn’t a fervent Communist and it wasn’t her idea, did he seduce her into this plot? If so, he’s even more despicable. He gets a noble suicide and she’s left to face the consequences.

-Has Robert Anquetil now blown his cover as an intelligence agent? Won’t the locals notice if he turns up at port on a navy destroyer? Hadn’t they noticed something before this? Anyway, he ended up being my favourite adult in this book. When he broke the rules, at least he was doing it to save the children.

– I really hope David was kicked out of the navy for attacking Robert, locking him up and taking over the boat. But he probably wasn’t. I mean, the navy didn’t seem to do anything to Foley for getting eighteen men killed.

– I don’t really see the point of Johnnie Thorpe. I wondered if he’d be shown to be brave and helpful, just to show the Marlows were being superficial snobs when they ostracised him, but he remained an idiot throughout.

– I was also kind of hoping the Thorpe daughters would play a useful role, thereby proving that even young ladies who wear tight, colourful trousers can be brave and helpful, but no, they might as well not have existed in the story. I’m starting to think that Antonia Forest’s idea of a heroine is a tomboy, because any girl character who displays any stereotypical girl behaviours, like being interested in clothes, always turns out to be useless. I have nothing against tomboys (I was one myself), but it would be nice to see a bit more variety when it comes to portrayals of heroines. I’ve only read two of her books though and maybe I’ll have a pleasant surprise in later books.

THE END (for the moment)

You might also be interested in:

‘The Marlows and the Traitor’ by Antonia Forest
‘The Marlows and the Traitor’, Part Two
‘The Marlows and the Traitor’, Part Three
‘The Marlows and the Traitor’, Part Four
‘The Marlows and the Traitor’, Part Five
‘The Marlows and the Traitor’, Part Six
‘The Marlows and the Traitor’, Part Seven


‘Autumn Term’ by Antonia Forest

11 thoughts on “‘The Marlows and the Traitor’, Part Eight”

  1. I have really enjoyed reading your take on this book so thank you for writing it! I hope you get to read Falconer’s Lure soon.
    I find the children’s reactions to Foley’s injury and death absolutely masterly – I can’t think of any other children’s adventure story in which the children firstly administer first aid in a genuinely anxious way, and then are upset by the villain’s death.
    Nicola should so have been the one to join the Navy. In fact, of the three Marlows who are capable of being in command of anything, it’s a tragedy that none of them can because they’re all girls.
    The Thorpes really are a bit pointless in this story; I think AF thought some people are essentially spare parts – there’s minor references in other books to characters who will lead ‘long, uneventful lives … but for whom doors will never open’. (The Players and the Rebels, quoting from memory so not being exact.) And there’s lots of references in the school stories to other girls just being dim rabbits and not ‘proper people’ in the main characters’ eyes.
    And, I hope this is not too spoilerish, but by the end of the series Nicola gets a pair of brightly coloured trousers!

    1. Thanks for your comments, Ann. I agree, the children’s sympathy for Foley, even as they work to defeat him, is described really well and it’s so plausible, after they’ve spent so much time with him and he has shown them some kindnesses. (Okay, he did kidnap them at gunpoint, but he also refused to murder them in cold-blood when ordered to do so.)
      Maybe Nicola will join the Wrens? I am pleased to hear she gets to wear colourful trousers, too! If she’s still a teenager in the 1980s, the trousers are probably paired with fluoro legwarmers and an oversized ‘Choose Life’ T-shirt…

  2. Hah! I had forgotten about those trousers! 🙂

    It would be nice to think that Peter’s vertigo is cured and all his self-doubt has disappeared. Alas, not quite the case. At least he doesn’t get PTSD from shooting a German Rear-Admiral though, he has no qualms about that whatsoever.

    I read the Marlow books wildly out of sequence, and this was the last one I managed to get hold of. But it illuminated so many aspects of the later books, even though the events are barely mentioned thereafter. (A brief, misleading reference to a shipwreck in Falconer’s Lure, one mention of Foley in Peter’s Room, and an oblique hint at spies in the Thuggery Affair.) But it sheds particular light on Ginty’s personality and behaviour to know that she’s had this ordeal behind her — not allowed to speak about it to anyone, not even her brother and sister who went through it, too — not being able to comfort herself that she did anything useful (not much anyway) to foil the spy. I felt a lot more sympathy with Ginty after reading this book.

    Roll on Falconer’s Lure!

    1. Well, it’s probably good that Peter isn’t a completely new person – that wouldn’t be plausible and it does provide lots of potential for future plots.

      Even though Ginty is mostly useless, she is the one who injures Foley and she was a key part of the fake-Peter’s-death plot. Hopefully she got to talk to her mother afterwards (I can’t imagine her father would be very sympathetic).

      I have Falconer’s Lure on my bookshelf! But I’ve got some library books and lots of work to finish first, so it might be a little while before I do my next Antonia Forest read-through. I’m pleasantly surprised at how many new commenters this series has brought to this blog – usually it’s pretty quiet here at Memoranda!

      1. I’ve never met anyone in real life who read AF so whenever there’s a chance to talk about her books online I jump at it!
        I’ve read back over some of your older blogs too and was interested in your comments on other books and authors I’ve read. I hadn’t heard of the Montmaray books (I’m in the UK) until someone on Facebook linked to your blog, but I tracked down a copy of the first one and am now ordering the next two.

        1. Probably the most-read book posts I’ve done (apart from those about my own books) are the posts about Elizabeth Jane Howard’s Cazalet Chronicles and anything related to the Mitfords. So Antonia Forest fits right in at Memoranda! It’s great being able to hear other readers’ perspectives on books you’ve loved, isn’t it? How did we manage before the internet?

          Hope you enjoy the Montmaray books!

  3. I have only met one person who is an AF fan (an English teacher at the school I worked at) -most of those I ‘know’ are on the Facebook group https://www.facebook.com/groups/387201654644254/ (someone mentioned your blog there!) or on the Trennels Live Journal site. I did introduce my daughter to the books when she was in her teens and she loved them too (might have disinherited her otherwise) and we had some interesting discussions abut them.
    Of course, Nicola now could have gone to sea now the Navy have changed the rules and had the same opportunities as Peter. She may have ended up outranking him…

  4. When I first read this I didn’t realize Ida Cross was a real person. I thought from the bit where Anquetil describes her going down the path to Mariners and says “And then of course I knew. It was Lewis Foley” — I assumed that meant Ida Cross was Foley in disguise. Hence all that about her having a blister on her heel to disguise how she walked, and stringy hair and thick glasses to be more of a disguise. But that doesn’t fit with her having an actual job with access to classified information, when Foley would have been off teaching at Dartmouth.

    1. This is such a great theory! I just re-read that bit and there’s nothing to show Ida ISN’T Foley in disguise. Maybe he had a secret double life dressing as Ida and working as a clerk. After all, he wouldn’t be teaching at Dartmouth in the holidays and maybe not all of term-time, either – I think he’s described as a sailing instructor, not a teacher. It would make the scene with Whittier extra-funny, with Whittier saying, ‘Are you quite sure? I know Foley is a bit strange but he IS a naval officer.” And that would explain why they never mentioned Ida again and couldn’t arrest her!

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